You’re your own first reader of course, so, hopefully, you make a habit of reading aloud every word you’ve written, listening closely to what you say and how effectively you say it. If something seems “off,” change it! Then, when your manuscript feels and sounds ready to you, find a good first reader.
If you just want a pat on the back, fine. Pick whoever knows and loves you a lot to read your manuscript and tell you how great it is.
If, however, you want an honest assessment of the strengths and weaknesses in your work so you can improve your writing as you revise, excellent! This means you’re aiming for professionalism, so your requirements for a first reader now need to be higher too.
But, where do you go or to whom do you turn?
For that important first reader, look for a friend, family member, or writing peer whom you trust to speak truthfully without putting you down.
If you’re fortunate enough to have several people in mind, pick the person who likes and often reads published works in the genre you have chosen.
As you choose your first reader, age will be a factor too. For example, if you write for preschoolers, read your story, poem, or nonfiction picture book text to young children who enjoy being read to in this fun Read-To-Me stage.
You do not even need to know your first reader! For instance, ask your local librarian about reading your work to the appropriate age group who regularly meets in the public library. This may be a weekly story time for preschoolers, a daily after-school program for older kids, or a literary discussion group for adults who get together each month. Regardless, take notes of the feedback you get, writing down exactly what was said, so you can carefully consider each comment later when you’re alone, ready to revise.
If your area offers a writing or critique group, this can provide yet another option for you to find a good first reader. Just give yourself time to get to know the individual members and the quality of their writing as you look for someone with whom you connect.
Look, too, for someone who shows respect for your work. Although you want to find someone you can count on to give you an honest assessment, you certainly do not want or need a first reader whose “honesty” is actually cruelty or jealousy in poor disguise!
Often, a first reader can spot rough spots in a manuscript, pointing them out matter-of-factly, which can help you to see what to do to improve the work. If this doesn’t happen, try putting your manuscript aside long enough to be able to return to it objectively.
If your first reader writes in your genre, s/he will be better equipped to advise you about ways to revise more effectively. If not – or if you know something is not working but do not know what to do to correct the problem, it’s probably time to get a professional critique.
4 comments:
My Mom, (who under normal circumstances is looked at as if she would automatically pinch your cheeks and tell you how "wonderful" your manuscript is even if it's completely not true) is my best critique, for two reasons:
1) We speak the same language. I'm not talking English, but that depth creative individuals have that sometimes can not be expressed properly to the outside world, so when an area of my manuscript isn't quite right, she knows exactly what I'm referring to, and what I'm trying to say.
2) She is also far enough away from the story I am writing to be an objective perspective on the technical aspects that I may not necessarily notice.
What I'm planning on doing is having her look my manuscript over when the first draft is complete, then find someone I have never met before critique it. Will likely save up for a professional critique (like Mary, *grins). That way I have the best of both worlds--someone closest to me, and someone who has never met me and can look at the manuscript completely as a manuscript.
Thank you for the tips! I also agree with the critique group idea too--we have a small group in our area that meets once a month, and I admire how close they have all become because of their writing.
That's great, Krissy! Writers in all genres need someone close to them who believes in their work and talents. When I began to write and get published, my dad and sisters constantly gave me the gift of encouragement, which nothing can replace.
Eventually, though, writers want their work accepted for publication. Then, an experienced poet, writer, or editor will notice many things that can help the manuscript at hand but also those yet to be written.
I agree! It is so important to get the right first reader. I think the best way to go is on instinct. If you experience any hesitation about the person you have chosen to read your manuscript, move straight on to someone else.
Yes! When I first began to write for publication, I took a short piece to a poetry reading since the poet had invited this after her talk. Silently, she read my poem then slung the paper in my direction without a glance. Addressing the groupies gathered around her, she railed against my work as if my lack of skill were a personal affront. She never looked at me. She never spoke to me. So, after a stunned moment, I slid my paper from her hand, turned my back, and walked away. Thinking about it now, though, I might have to thank her! She reminded me of my belief in the Golden Rule, illustrating the importance of treating others, as I want to be treated, with respect, regardless of skill.
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